This is a very nice first attempt. There is a little room for improvement like you could do some sidechaining (but don't overdo the sidechaining), but overall this does not sound bad at all. I can see that you used FL Studio stock plugins, but I don't blame you because we all use the stuff provided for us in a DAW as we start music production, and it takes a while to be able to get third-party equipment. That's pretty much what I did when I started back in 2019.