Well, this isn't bad at all, it is kind of cool if I am being honest, but if I am also being honest, the parts before the buildup and the two beat drops are the same, well, except that in the second beat drop, it uses a different drumbeat until 2:38. The transition between breakdown at 1:49 and the second buildup doesn't work that well because of the abrupt sidechaining in that buildup, Maybe if you used some crash cymbals and reverse crash cymbals for the transition, and removed the sidechaining in that buildup, it would be a lot better, and the first buildup could use some those edits as well. Oh, and speaking of crash cymbals, the track could use some of such impact for better transitions. Anyway, this is a pretty song to listen to, and it's mixed well, too!